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#21 pingzing

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Posted 08 August 2017 - 11:09 AM

Hi Mate
 
Course got my attention, so jumped in to have a look see
Something different i can see here, so well done
 
Pics link below of things i have pointed out for you to take a gander at 

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0ByTR6w_prq1MWEJsTjZNUGZGMWs

 

Extremely large course file- way too big actually

Fps was ok
Didn`t get time to check the greens 
 
Hole 1- Stake on bridge
Hole 2- trees over pathway
Hole 3- Soften bunker slope and give it some depth in sand
Hole 4- Fix path, Soften bunker slope and give it some depth in sand, grass is very bright, bunker odd shape on the end there
Hole 5- trees over pathway, grass blocking over end of bridge, remember people and carts are going over that area, try and keep it real 
Odd shaped bunker here, bunker need shaping-depth wise'
 
Hole 6- Check slope at end f/way there, might be too excessive
Hole 7- trees over pathway, and flatten path- try and keep them realistic looking
Hole 8- trees over pathway flatten and smooth bunkers
Hole 9- trees over pathway, fix odd shaped bunker, too narrow and looks awkward,make it more natural shaped, fix creek 
Hole 10-trees over pathway, make entry to bridge terrain level , fix bunker, moredepth and even
Hole 11-Flatten tee
Hole 12-trees over pathway, join creek, flatten pathway
Hole 13-even depth of bunker
Hole 14-trees over pathway
Hole 15-Floating tree, fix bunker
Hole16-Fix pathway, fix bunker,
Hole17-Fix creeks, trees over pathway, tree on path and floating, 
Hole18-trees over pathway, flatten path, tear in terrain- right side of green short
 
 
Nice job on 1st course interesting/character, always good to see
 
Cheers
 


#22 yesrushdt

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Posted 09 September 2017 - 06:33 PM

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